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disny07 2008-06-06 ch 6,	Umm, yes he is. They are at the funeral, and begin to lower the coffin into the ground. Suddenly, a loud knocking is heard. She runs to the coffin and throws it open. Inside, Brian is awake, dazed, cofused, and terrified. Then he sees her, and knows he is safe. The two go home and live hapily ever after. Until they both die thirty years later in a tragic sky diving accident. THE END. (You know you love it.)
disny07 2008-06-06 ch 5,	HI! I am finally reviewing. Sorry it took me three days! Aw, it sucks when everyone plays a game that you hate. You are all left out and alone. cry So sad, but at least she was happy to play by herself. She has every right to complain! But, playing with rocks can be quite entertaining. YAY FORTS! They are so much fun! And Brian is with her now. I love Brian the coma boy. He's so sweet, thinking about her like that. And it's a FORT! I love how it's bigger than them. Stupid teachers telling them to take it down. I hated when our forts were killed by teachers. I had an old friend named Tony, and we'd do stuff like that all the time. Only, our teachers were nuns, so it wasn't dissapointing- just terrifying. Sorry, I got off on a tangent there, didn't I? Vic: You're face!? What...? Lol, yay for studying chemistry. They are so cute together. The perfect recess is spent like this. It's so sweet. Sque! Lol, they were carried into the school because they were laughing too hard. It was a good story. I loves it! One question though: They are really sweet together, and played with each other during recess. Why then, don't they become really good friends and hang out alot? I mean, she asks him to the prom, but that is many many years later. Either way, I love this story! Yay for finishing it.
heartfeltlove 2008-04-29 ch 4,	This story is so sweet! I love it! Update soon! ^.^
disny07 2008-04-29 ch 4,	SQUE! OMGOMGOMG! You updated! That makes me so happy. Seriously. I got the alert thing on my email, and I almost screamed with joy. This made my day. And the Sama picture you drew. Now, to the review: His name is Brian. I forgot about that. I like it, but my dad's name is Brian. A little awkward, but still cool. Yay! He said yes. It would be very awkward if he didn't though. Yay! I love how all the girls are squealing and happy, and the guys are going insane lol. Very nice. I want that dress. I need that dress. It sounds amazing. I want it. That will be my prom dress. I don't care if it is impossible to find. I will find it and it will be mine. So there. I personally think if he got lipstick all over his face it would be hysterical. I'd laugh. A black ’67 Chevy Impala? You have supernatural on the brain, don't ya? Oh well, it's still the coolest car ever. He's a quarterback? Mokey. I personally don't like football players of any kind, but i'm biased(marching band drum majors could kick our quarterback **. You know it's true. Which is sad.). I still like him though. He's a cool quarterback. I like her too. She's funny and insane. SQUE! They Kiss! They Kiss! They Kiss! YAY!! I really did squeek here. Then awed. It was so sweet. You are a great writer. You just have to update more. Only one more chapter? Cry. I love this story. I also just realized that he dies. I really will cry. Can he have had a coma, but before they bury him alive(since they think he's dead), he miraculously wakes up? He can not die! oh well, I know it's to late. Update soon! I am hooked again. (Look what you've done to me. My review is uber long. Thanks for influencing me.)
Beth 2007-06-30 ch 1,	nice begining. sorry i waited so long to review this!! i reviewed the 2nd chapter, but NO, its not enough! im kidding, i dont mind reviewing your stories!!
beth 2007-06-30 ch 3,	nice chapter! you have GREAT discriptions of people and things. i could almost picture them!
disny07 2007-06-29 ch 3,	This was great. So much happier than the first chapter. It was awesome, he proposed! Another wonderful chapter and I loved it very much.
disny07 2007-06-28 ch 2,	I liked this chapter. It was really sweet, and happy! Please update. I tried writing this sooner but it wouldn't let me, sorry. It is really good and I want to read more.
Beth 2007-06-21 ch 1,	is this going to be like Wicked, and have flashbacks be the middle of the story, while the begining and end are present time? because that would be kinda cool, even though it has been done before (what good idea hasn't?). oh well, it's a good start.
disny07 2007-06-21 ch 1,	That was really good. It was sad too. I feel depressed now, but I did love it. Great job.

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