Oh, blackmail, how cruel. ^-^

Dave is so mean and funny. Like how he almost shut the cat's tail in the car and how he steals bikes randomly. But then he redeems himself when he does cute things like peeking from behind a wall on Ray and stalking him around.

And Ray. Ray's such a little baby. I just want to scream "This man is David! DAVID!" in his face.

But alas, good chapter once more. I'm glad this story is un-dead now. Expect threatening PM's quite soon! :)

Blackmail is evil, you know. -__-'

David turns out to be a real jackass, huh? I'm not sure whether I should be relieved or disappointed. I'll let the coming chapters to decide that one.

I can't help but feel bad for Ray. Did he seriously deserve an ex-boyrfriend haunting him? (Is this seriously about deserving? I doubt it.)

Blackmail or no, keep writing, please. Seeing how this ends is second on my wish list - the first being finding my muses. And judging by your writing skills, I'm hardly the only one waiting for the next chapter.

Blackmail is mean, you know? XD

The first scene still makes me giggle like mad. (Now people are looking at me and inching farther away. -__-) There's just something really cute in David and Ray's (non-)communication.

It's baffling me how the moods of your chapters can vary so much. Usually this story seems to be anything from melancholic to downright depressing. These short bouts of humour are always surprising, but definitely not disturbing (like the rest of the story - just kidding). They suit it for some unknown reason. Maybe they keep the story from becoming too heavy and depressing.

And am I the only one who smirks when thinking of David's new dilemma? I'm eader to see how he - and Ray - is going to solve it. Must be annoying when what keeps your beloved (for some reason I can't link this word with either of them...) from you is his will not to betray you.

Ah, sorry, FC, I know I should have read this months ago. ;_; I tried to explain why I couldn't, although I had thought I would be able to return to this story earlier. I never felt up to it before now, though. ;_;

" But for now he would probably only wake him up screaming and earn another hole in his head - this time though, distinctly bullet-shaped one. " --Something in that sentence makes me crack up. The rest of it (not copied here) makes me cry. It's too sad and too... something. Omen of tragedy, perhaps? I know not.

You cut this chapter off in an entirely unfair place, by the way. No love for you. (Be lucky that you have already updated the next chapters. ^_~)

DAVE, YOU SEXY, EVIL DEMON! :D The more I read the more I get pulled in by your amazing characters, Luff.
You DARE blackmail me? I'll BM you x50!~ Don't make me come to your house and teach you a lesson, young lady! D:< *puts on brass knuckles*

Do I detect manlovin' soon!?

This was awesome!

I like this story.

Towels. xD So cute. But now I can't believe there are only six chapters. I am saddened. UPDATE PLEASE! Don't let your creativity die!

Collective gasp! No! Must read more.

So that's how it all happened. Does this mean Demon Dave must kill Ray? GOODNESS.

Crazy...I love the writing. It's great. ^_^

OMIGOD. I don't usually read slash, it's just not what I'm into, but when I read this I almost flipped. It's fantastic! I lovvee it. You're too cool.

Hehe, Dave is really taking it calmly; or at least that how it seems. "Well... do you think you could like... pass me a towel, or something?" That was genius, seriously!
And aww, what was that, Ray admited (indirectly, but still...) that Dave was "someone important"! How cute. Too bad he didn't save that important person when he needed it most. I really hope Dave won't forgive him too easily, that would be... well, too easy.
I still love your story, and I'm very glad you're not giving up on this marvellous masterpiece!

That was so sexy! I can't believe you were going to abandon this! ; ^; *shakes fist* I'm going to keep pestering you now...I don't want you to ever stop writing this story! *cusses in many languages* D:<