this is actually really good, its one of the beter writings on here that i had actually seen, keep writing

Wow, that was deep, but at the same time, it was pure and simple, and it told a story that was both offense and defense, sorrow and comfort, neither here nor there in only a small amount of words.

It's definitely food for thought --or at least something to think about in a general sense. Perhaps even an inspiration if you were to think of it in that sort of light.

The only error i could find was this: "Lightfinder battle the darkness in you"
do you mean "Lightfinder battleS"? I don't think that that sentence is grammatically correct, but then again, i could very well be wrong.