This was good as well. I prefer the edited letter, but the unedited letter begins with a lighter, more conversational tone that I like as well, though not so much for this format, which is more business-like.

It's fascinating to see your writing process, and you clearly have natural style if this is unedited.

Thanks for the insight!

Em

This is so true. Tongue-in-cheek, but strikingly accurate.

If you struggle with your inner editor, I'll tell you how I kicked mine: National Novel Writing Month. I don't know if you've heard of it, but basically, you write 50,0 words in one month (November), and you don't edit anything, even spelling errors, until you're completely done. It's refreshing, and a great experience.

Excellent letter, and good luck with your new business arrangement!

Em

Correct the typos and this is almost as good as the final product. Too bad my works have to go through hours of editing just to be decent. :/

I enjoyed this. I am aware this is based on your personal expirence and I must say, I have the same problem as you do.

This was an enjoyable read and I am sure many writers can relate to it.

No real critiques here.

What? No one's reviewed yet?

...Will, would it be inappropriate to point out how much of an oddball you are and how no one may ever completely understand the motivation behind such pieces? This thing reads like a comment about thiking and thought/structure organization presented in an unusual way. All in all, it's very clever. I'm not sure if I sense a int of bias in the editing, or whether it is extreemly unbias fairness. I just can't make up my mind.

As always, good work and keep it rolling, mate.

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