the last line summed it all up beatifully, another happy poem that actually makes me happy and not wanna shoot myself 'cause of the cheesiness, nice work.

nicely done! auwsome! :-)

Nicely written. I love how the last line closes the poem. Beautifully done, keep writing.

M, I really like this. Stay or the moment or think about the tomorrow? Very good points brought up in this poem. I enjoyed it.

Good work.

love, theatrical rhapsodies

I really like this! it flows really well. Is it talking about living for the moment and not worrying about the future? That's how I interpretted the whole seconds or years part. But you probably don't care how I interpretted it. Anyways, I liked what I got out of the poem.