Reviews for How to Fly While Falling: Rising

Shadows in the Fire 2008-01-05 ch 8,	abuseI liked this chapter, even if you didn't. -Corrections- 1.) "said you too could" you TWO. -Shadow
Shadows in the Fire 2008-01-05 ch 7,	abuseNice. -Shadow
Shadows in the Fire 2008-01-05 ch 6,	abuseWow, I love this. I can't stop reading. -Shadow
Shadows in the Fire 2008-01-05 ch 5,	abuseI love the format. Just make sure to put periods, not commas.
Shadows in the Fire 2008-01-05 ch 4,	abuse-Corrections- 1.) "Just leave me alone," It would be a period, not a comma. Nice chapter. -Shadow
Shadows in the Fire 2008-01-05 ch 3,	abuseFantastic! These chapters keep getting better and better! I loved this one--the ending was breathtaking. -Shadow
Shadows in the Fire 2008-01-05 ch 2,	abuseThis chapter is much better than the first! I love the last lines, and how the bold parts could almost be a poem in themselves.
Shadows in the Fire 2008-01-05 ch 1,	abusePretty first chapter, but it's hard to follow. Be sure to make it clear who is speaking, and about what.
whispered something profoun... 2007-06-20 ch 1,	abuseI love the format! And the character people are very interesting. Well, off to explore chapter two!