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| the naked civil servant 2008-02-10 ch 1,  | abusesweetheart, don't be fooled. sirens only come in two colors. accident and tragedy. (and neither likes to whisper.) that stanza is god i also love "wrists bent frail" there's some kind of bittersweet sick sadness here, full of diamond imagery, slick sliding sibelance and abrasive alliteration. j'adore, ma chere, c'est formidable. i have some strange inchoate obsession with your poetry, keep coming back for more. |
| Typesour 2007-07-18 ch 1, | abuseoh my. This is blanketing. the words in this all kind of linger and mold to something deeper and intense like a cocoon or something. i reread the last part aloud and it made me shiver. amazing job. |
| wordsworth in a garbage can 2007-07-12 ch 1, | abuseif you put out a book of poetry, by the way, i'd buy it. (just noticed that in your profile.) the third stanza- "sirens only come in two colors. accident and tragedy."- that's a stroke of genius. keep writing, please. you're terrific at it- i can't dream of ever coming close to things like this. |
| Tytherpol 2007-06-30 ch 1, | abusei like it. |
| Her Wishing Well 2007-06-26 ch 1, | abuseAmazing. I don't know what else I can say - it just is. |
| summerbee 2007-06-23 ch 1, | abuseyou floor me every damn time |
| lackluster 2007-06-21 ch 1, | abusei went into this all sing-song-y. cocaine dolly. but the poet is above that. and like always, you don't fail to amaze. especially with your endings. brilliant. |
| distorted reality x 2007-06-21 ch 1, | abuseoh wow that was really good. it sent shivers down my spine. love it. |
| cocaine and cherries 2007-06-20 ch 1, | abusei know this girl. lovely, as always. |
| amillionlittlepieces 2007-06-20 ch 1, | abusecold raw sharp cruel. truth. "oh, but, sweetheart, don't be fooled. sirens only come in two colors. accident and tragedy. (and neither likes to whisper.) Beautiful. |
| love between the radio stat... 2007-06-20 ch 1, | abuseoh baby. i needed to read something like that. you make me shiver, in a really yummy way. |