this is a very good piece of prose.

i like it.

At first it all sounded pretty 'normal' but then this story sort of chilled me. 'No wonder this house is a skeleton' Really well written and core-shaking.

Wow, this is a powerful piece. You didn't even need to say much, it's simple and that's what makes it rememberable. Keep up the awesome work, this was again a great piece. Totally going in my fav, I liked it.

Faith

I think everyone feels that way sometimes. I know I do.