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| hey maria 2007-06-20 ch 1,   | "Id take to task unbalanced sums" I think you meant "I'd," unless you're referring to the psychological term, in which case this poem is way over my head. I really loved this poem. I thought the structure of 8- and 6-syllable lines, though simple enough, made the poem flow really well. And I adored the theme of opposites, day and night, black and white. Nice job. |
| whispered something profoun... 2007-06-20 ch 1, | This is brilliant really. I can see myself reading this out of a bestselling published book. |