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Was it inspired by "She"? Because the broken mirror is the same as in that poem, but I haven't read enough of her work to know if maybe there's another poem she wrote like that which inspired you. *shrug* Whatever the answer, this poem was great.

Zaijen

-Shan-

My favourite lines were:

"She takes her time

And lets everything out

So when she says she’s ok

She’s not met with doubt"

Well crafted as always.

Lisa :)

wow thts inspiring, much love homs, thanx for the review also

Thank you for the compliment :)

You know I think this is a great poem, I like that you've made it flow instead of forcing it into specific rhymes.

Oh, and - welcome back.