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Reviews For:
Seth
tangledwebweweave
2007-07-08 . chapter 1
Aw. Very cute. If only that love would come to me. (Well, expressing wise)
Basara
2007-06-22 . chapter 1
sweet...
nice...
moonsliver86
2007-06-21 . chapter 1
Not bad. The haiku is sincere, simple, and sweet. It would be better though if the flow (way it is read) of the haiku wasn't so sentence-like. In any case, it is a wonderful work.
rebeldork
2007-06-20 . chapter 1
Aww, how cute. :) I like it. Very heartfelt. Good job.
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