Well, I like this story :) Are you going to continue it?

Wow, I really like this story so far and look forward going back and reading your other ones. I love the interactions between the two and loving seeing how Hayden reacts. It makes for a delicious story. I look forward to seeing more of your work.

where have you been?!??!?!

Such a sweet story and so very down-to-earth! I absolutely love following Hayden and Devon through their little moments. :P
I can't wait to read more! Take care.

~Tatsuya

Yay! I am so excited for this update. I love this story!

i love this story... please update!

this fic is great. i can't wait for chapter 5

Absolutely fabulous work on this chapter, Jay. I have to admit I was pulsing with anticipation to the very end...but then Hayden had to act all cool like that... Oh well, I'm sure he has big plans for that bottle. *wink* I can't wait to see where this goes next. Somehow, this story is lovely to read as the rain falls on the porch and I sip my hot cocoa in the calm of Nature. Great job! Until the next chapter, adieu, mon ami!

Haha! That was unexpected. Nice, but unexpected :).

Never top Hayden would turn the tables. Good job. :)

ZL

You know, I was looking for a story that will help me cheer myself up; and your story did just that. Hopefully you'll comeplete this lovely piece. I will be really looking foward to the next chapter. :)

Thanks for making my day,
ZL

OMG I so loved that chapter! Poor Devon, but gonna love those phones! I can hardly wait for the next chapter too, I so love this story. It makes me all warm and fuzzy!

Dark

Fabulous!! I absolutely love how this is coming along! I'm loving Hayden; he's too adorable! Stephen seems to have a deeper connection to him that I'm just dying to find out about. Can't wait until you write some more to this brilliant piece. Great job.

Wes

Excellent work as always, Jay!! This is really heating up, and I just can't wait to see how this progresses! Great job!

Wes

XD

Oh... The plot has thickened. I have to say this is one of the best intriguing stories I've read in a while. I still like Hayden, and have to say Devon makes me wonder whats going to happen next, and what he has up his sleeve!

I look forward to reading more.

Dark