Oh I love this one, it's sexy. Rawr! You use such picturesque phrases that really evoke some sensual pictures. Written very nicely

That's definitely my favorite so far! I'm adding it to my favorites, for sure, cause I loved the way you described everything, and I love the way the poem just flows, and makes it easier to udnerstand, even though it's something so complex.

it is a very beautiful name and it means a lot.

this is a nice poem. i like the choppiness and the rhythm. it helps with the emotion.

i admit, tytherpol means absolutely nothing.

goodjob.

I love this one too! You're having an amazing writing day today hun!