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| Love Eternally 2008-01-21 ch 2,   | OOh i want more! |
| Kailum 2007-09-29 ch 2, | I like how this story is going ^^ The picture thing was cute lol. At first I thought he had planted a kiss on his lips and I was like OMGOMGOMG! And then the end said that it was on the cheek and I was like... too bad =P Anyways, MORE ACTION and get rid of the girlfriend! =P hahaha. |
| Twilight Faerie 2007-07-09 ch 2, | So like when are they gonna do it already? (Just kidding, well sorta...I like the pacing, and Scott is like so gay and hot for Ryan. Keep on writing) |
| Phoenix II 2007-07-09 ch 2, | I kinda feel a little sorry for Ryan. It's like he's over-compensating for something. I wonder what... Is it really that bad in that school that you have to be straight-as-a-ruler and not-condemning-homosexuality? It's like mandatory bi-curiousity without any of the fun!! That said, I like the way this story is going...especially the sexual metaphors for fast food...those are ALWAYS fun. "I don't like Hooters! No, no, the RESTAURANT!! Tits? Gimme gimme gimme!!" XDD *eyeroll* Wow... |
| Maris. S 2007-07-09 ch 2, | *lmao* i cannot believe how hilarious this story is so far. You're doing a great job =) And I can't wait to see how Scott is going to prove to Ryan that he's homophobic *cough* I mean NOT homophobic... teehee~ Please update as soon as you can |
| Meri 2007-07-09 ch 2, | OMG! I LOVE IT!*makes more fangirl noises of adoration* |
| Kailum 2007-06-26 ch 1, | XD I liked it. Although when I saw 'fin', I was like, OMG WHAT!? And then I realized that there would be more =P Anyways, is Scott gay?? I mean.. he has a girlfriend of four years so O_o; CUZ SCOTT + RYAN WOULD BE JUST SO CUTE. Haha. The homophobic thing is funny lol. Update soon please! :D |
| Phoenix II 2007-06-24 ch 1, | So. Somehow this seems completely different. But in a good way. You managed to turn this into quite the original fic concept. I'm very interested in where this one wanders off to. As always. And wondering why my alerts on you don't seem to be working... |
| c 2007-06-22 ch 1, | this is great! continue! |
| Esquirella 2007-06-22 ch 1, | VERY cute! |
| fivestar ice 2007-06-22 ch 1, | I'd like to read more |
| And-on-Anonymous 2007-06-21 ch 1, | good stuff! Nice idea- it's funny and lighthearted but i think you got the whole inbred homophobia thing downn really well- he blatantly is a small bit homophobic, but is in denial- it's really common, one of my freinds is like that- she gay and has a girlfriend but gets wierd about being gay and people finding out and things. anyway, nough rambling- looking forward to th next chapter :) |
| Boo26 2007-06-21 ch 1, | Oh, I really like this so far! Please update soon. ;) Anna |