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| Carmel March 2008-02-04 ch 23,  | abuseEven though it's been awhile since I've been on Fictionpress, I've definitely not forgotten this story. I loved it. And I'm quite sad that's it's come to an end. It's this kind of story that keeps me coming back for more. I hope to see more from you in the future :) ~Carm~ |
| AkitoTae 2008-01-31 ch 5, | abuseVery good, I haven't read through it all, but I still think it's really good so far! |
| Naomi Chick 2007-12-30 ch 23, | abuseThat's so sweet. Great job! |
| Naomi Chick 2007-12-29 ch 22, | abuseGood chapter. |
| Carmel March 2007-12-05 ch 21, | abuseThat was amazingly amazing. Even though it's been awhile since I've set eyes on this story (about which I am terribly sorry about!), I immediately got right back into it the moment I started reading. This story keeps getting deeper and even more interesting. Keep up this wonderful work, and I'm looking forward to reading more :) ~Carm~ |
| Arabella Smith 2007-12-03 ch 21, | abuseSo0o0o0o0o0o0 stinking god! |
| Ladybugg13 2007-12-01 ch 21, | abuseAww. Aiden! She's so selfless! I don't know if I could ever do something like that... Really great! Update as soon as you can! |
| Carmel March 2007-10-20 ch 20, | abuseI'm really, truly amazed at how this story is only getting better and better. With every new chapter, I'm even more impressed with your talents as a writer. Keep up this superly duperly great work! ~Carm~ PS I'm so very very sorry for not reviewing sooner! It may take me awhile to read and review, but just know that I still am, 'kay? :) |
| Arabella Smith 2007-10-10 ch 20, | abuseyes! another chapter! i'm sorry about the writers block.. i know how that feels! lol well write more soon please! |
| Ladybugg13 2007-10-09 ch 20, | abuse?!?! Ack! Now, that was just a teaser update! No fair! Whenever i get writers block I write something completely diffrent. Like a random story or a poem. It doesn't even have to be good, but it gets the creativeness going when you just write something. -bugg |
| Carmel March 2007-10-06 ch 19, | abuseSorry, sorry, sorry! I didn't mean to take so long to review. I had read this when I had had a smidgen of time, but never managed to leave a review. But here I am :) I can't get over how well this story is put together. It reads so smoothly, and it's so intriguing. This chapter was just as fantastic as the rest of them. I'll try my best not to take a million kajillion years next time ;) ~Carm~ |
| Naomi Chick 2007-09-29 ch 19, | abuseGood detail aded to the chapter. |
| Ladybugg13 2007-09-29 ch 19, | abusegreat update. I'm so glad she's okay. for now at least. More when you can? -Bugg |
| Carmel March 2007-09-23 ch 18, | abuseOkay, so I've been the worst reviewer in the history of reviewers. I'm so sorry for taking so long! This story is still as good as ever. Even if I haven't read it in awhile, the minute I read a few paragraphs, it all comes back to me; the characters, the plot, the style of writing, everything. It takes an amazing story, and not to mention, author, to do that :) Keep this up, and update soon! ~Carm~ |
| Ladybugg13 2007-09-16 ch 18, | abuseo wow. She's so calm! I would have had a heart attack by then! And I wonder what her purpose is! And btw, YAY! You updated! Update son! Both stories!! I love ur stuff! |