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| AkikoEtsuchou 2008-07-04 ch 1, | abuseThis fic made me laugh, and it was oh so delicious. Short but sweet. Nice. |
| Vintor 2008-06-27 ch 1, | abuseI loved the almost-care-free nature of Russ :) I also loved how it seems as if he takes shit from no one and could not be pushed into things or hidden away for long. I also loved how he did not get attached and moved on so quickly - the boys reaction was interesting :D Brilliant little one-shot! |
| Marisa Gittinger 2007-12-10 ch 1, | abuseFucking amazing! A better review at a later date. :) ~Marisa~ |
| Chocolate Herrings 2007-11-11 ch 1, | abuseThat was a wonderful read. Russell's personality is intriguing, and it was a lot of fun watching him lose his cool. Good luck on the publishing! |
| Jevanminx 2007-10-19 ch 1, | abuseLove it, that is just excellent. First slash one that I have read on Fictionpress and itwas so cute. JM |
| Werehuntress 2007-09-10 ch 1, | abuseWow looks like i'm gonna fave all your stories! I liked this one a lot. I wonder what became of Eli? I kinda liked him but i liked John better :D Dammit why'd it have to be a oneshot?! Motto, motto, motto! |
| ruler of the known world 2007-08-07 ch 1, | abuseYou know, I actually own a pair of purple, leopard print panties. Lol. How awkward is that? Anyway, I love banana ice cream, so I'll give you props for that. And Russel is awesome! He reminds me of this guy I know. ^_^ Keep up the excellent work! |
| Bleed The Dream 2007-07-17 ch 1, | abuseAhaha once again another wonderful story. Loved Russ' personality. Like oh em gee corr! Okay, no. But the slang was interesting. PS: You're so cruel to your brother. XD Joking, joking. I'm sure... he deserved the... er... laughter and... injuries. ._. I'm sure. |
| elle 2007-06-29 ch 1, anon. | abuselove it! It's so much fun! haha |
| Garrett 2007-06-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis was incredibly tame for you. I liked it but whoa with the tameness...sweetness...awesomeness...I'm so excited! |
| giRLAddiCted 2007-06-25 ch 1, | abuseHeyy! Love the story! Funny main character and the ending rocked my socks. Cool story! Write more! |
| Maris. S 2007-06-24 ch 1, | abuselol I liked this and I thought that it fit as a one-shot. But as always, I enjoyed it =) |
| nonaccount 2007-06-24 ch 1, | abuseAdorable! Great beginning, especially the first four paragraphs, they really set the scene for me. I like your little touches of reality too like, "[o]nce the numbness receded from my ass, I pulled my bike from where it leaned against the fence . . ." It helps to imprint the scene and I have an, "oh yeah that does happen" moment. - If that makes sense. :)My favorite line, "Oh, them? I was bored, so I called them some things and insinuated some things and faked a pass for the leader's girlfriend because she blew me a kiss." Funny. |
| Reigning Fyre 2007-06-23 ch 1, | abuseI was never much of one to like stories where the folks are "Promiscuous" but then again...It was alright, cause John's a cutie. Sadly, I'm just a dumbass who likes it when people are loyal to one another...::cries:: Congrats on the publishing though! You more than deserve it! Let me know when that happens so I can support yah with teh moniez! 8D |
| Naomi Schemer 2007-06-23 ch 1, | abuseI don't think that's the attitude one should take when one's sibling gets hurt. I don't like the fact this is a one-shot. I like Russ's character too much. It's completed, though, so I guess I could just read it again if I want more Russel. John reminded me a bit of Nathan from Queer as Folk UK...young, reckless, foolish, but very endearing. Heh..I'm still amused by Russel's character. |