Reviews for Some Kind Of Wonderful

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Mike90 2008-06-05 ch 1,	abuseHey...Congrats on getting your story published!! I really love your story and was so looking forward to reading the continuation of your story..I reckon I was up to the part of Eyvah deciding on leaving her baby with the adopted parents in England...So...How can I get hold of your book?
MZ PEACHESZZ 2008-05-31 ch 1,	abuseYou're getting this published?!!? I am speechless. I just don't know if anything I would say would not hurt your feelings so I am not even going to try but honestly, this book had better go through some MAJOR plot editing before you even attempt to put it out there because... Your story is erratic, shifting, incoherent, no substance, just an exuse for sex, loopholed plot, unrealistic, cheesy, cliche, histrionic, and a story that I really believed was just for reader's pleasure online BUT NOT as an actual book. Please don't take what I am saying as a flame or that I dislike you or anything too negative- just please, before you put something like this out on the market, do yourself and your readers a favor and EDIT.
magic sparkler 2008-05-30 ch 1,	abuselet me no about the book deffo interested x
EmeraldEyes25 2008-05-28 ch 40,	abuseWhoa the drama never stops lol! I have to say this is always exciting to read, you never know whats gonna happen next. I love it!
magic sparkler 2008-05-27 ch 40,	abuseheya hun congratulations on getting published im so frustrated i wont no the end for a while but it will be worth it! im also in love with hatred and one in the same. keep us updted ill certainly b reading! x
tanya2byour21 2008-05-24 ch 40,	abuseOh great chapter and I loved J's secret did not see that coming. I can't wait to see who is going to win the bet. Keep up the great writing and please post more when you can. tanya
invizygirl 2008-05-24 ch 40,	abuseo a teacher? damn...whoa. lol. update soon.
adge24 2008-05-24 ch 40,	abuseWOW! Awesome chapter! Keep up the great work, and please try to update again soon! I can't wait to see what will happen next!
chevy-luv 2008-05-24 ch 40,	abuseloved it ! hahhaha no sex for 2 weeks - good luck to them! Jaiden needs to go through with the plan to expose his wife cheating on him - hopefully it works! please update soon :)
lilly 2008-05-24 ch 40, anon.	abusejaidens in love with a teacher? a teacher hooked up with a 16 year old kid? and she kept forgiving his playboy ways? i mean, it could happen, but isnt it abir far-fetched?
pixilated.x 2008-05-23 ch 40,	abuseLoved this chapter! Can't wait to see what happens with Eyvah. And that bet.. hm I wonder how they will deal ;] Update as soon as possible!
s-pecial-lee me 2008-05-23 ch 40,	abuseuh wasnt expecting that. gawd all my respect for jaiden just went out the door.
xoxo1 2008-05-23 ch 40,	abuseomg, hes in love with a teacher!! wow haha, wonder if jordan and josh will last two weeks xD
beautiful chaos21 2008-05-23 ch 40,	abuseDun dun dun! I so didn't see that happening so Jaiden and the gym teacher. i don't know if you ever mentioned her before but I don't think so. I could totally be wrong. ANyways I'm sad that this story is coming to an end. Do you know what would be totally cool...is if you made a sequel to this story told in Dayne and Fate's child, Chris, POV. Another future fic it would be kind of cool to see what happen to him maybe trying to connect with his real family and what happen to the callaway siblings and of course Jordan and Bella. SOrry once my fingers start to type it's like they have a mind of their own. :) Update soon! BC 21
Tickle my Pickle 2008-05-23 ch 40,	abuseI can't wait to read about Marc and Leila's wedding I absolutely love them. You set this story in California and the law there is no fault. So, it wouldn't matter if Eyvah is cheating on him; it may make him look sympathetic to the court. I think his best bet to get out of his marriage would be to annul it due to fraud. Because if she married him for his money and not love then she was committing fraud. The way Sara spoke she sounded like a teenager. I feel Sara would be better off without Jaiden it sounded like he treated her horribly. Really no grown woman needs to be screwed over by a high school kid. I look forward to how all of this is going to play out.

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