You are like, some sort of one-shot God. I swear.
You never read stories that revolve around a group of characters, but the narrator is some kind of observer. More stories should be written like that :/
Like I said before, you have some sort of amazing talent. I've only read your one-shots, so I don't know how your multiple-chapter stories are.
Kind of excited to find out :]

heart breaker.

Aw... bookwarms are adorable. And the fact that its from the point of view of the librarian just makes it that much more interesting.
It makes me see my school librarian in a different light. But not really a good on... it would be too creepy to think that she eavesdrops like that... and get her rocks of watching other people's love lives develop.

that's so depressing... it was cute, and amusing and interesting... and then it died and made me sad... hmph... but it was good. just a little... disheartening. well. it's nice, so. good job. i like it.

but it made me sad.

anyway. i'm going to stop typing now.

This is really sad and beautiful. I like the fact that we see it all from a distance and never completely experience everything.

Aw. :(
No happy ending for Kevin and Ray? Shame.

That was sad, like really sad. If i were her I would have totally tried to hook them back up!

Ah, the librarian's POV, right?
That's good. It's sort of original, well I haven't read any others like this. Your writing style's nice though...

aw sad.
i may have to go in once during first lunch at my school, just to make sure this isnt going on. cos if it is, i may have to join. HAH:)

I like the action set in such a quiet peaceful place as a library, and the librairain so much like a guardian of their growing relationship, witness to its beginning and end. I have hope that they ge back together, since Ray's look is reassuring to me.

Well, I thought it's a cute little story. Amusing, too. Though it's kinda sad they had to split up, if I understood it right.

I wish you can make a sequel to this, or perhaps make it a series? ;)

nice job on this
i loved it
i knida wanted it to end happily
but whatever :]

Oh, I wanted a happy ending. (pouts a little) Ok, I know not all stories can end with or hint at forever love, but one can hope. ;)

Aww. :( GET THEM BACK TOGETHER!! XDD

Awhh.
They seemed cutee.
Too bad.
(: I loved it.