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| Leaving Here 2008-04-17 ch 1,  | abuseaw sad. i may have to go in once during first lunch at my school, just to make sure this isnt going on. cos if it is, i may have to join. HAH:) |
| Isidris Gry 2008-03-05 ch 1, | abuseI like the action set in such a quiet peaceful place as a library, and the librairain so much like a guardian of their growing relationship, witness to its beginning and end. I have hope that they ge back together, since Ray's look is reassuring to me. |
| j.d. egan 2007-10-08 ch 1, | abuseWell, I thought it's a cute little story. Amusing, too. Though it's kinda sad they had to split up, if I understood it right. I wish you can make a sequel to this, or perhaps make it a series? ;) |
| suicide girls and death boy... 2007-10-07 ch 1, | abusenice job on this i loved it i knida wanted it to end happily but whatever :] |
| nonaccount 2007-09-17 ch 1, | abuseOh, I wanted a happy ending. (pouts a little) Ok, I know not all stories can end with or hint at forever love, but one can hope. ;) |
| seraphim-rush 2007-08-25 ch 1, | abuseAww. :( GET THEM BACK TOGETHER!! XDD |
| DANCE.PARTY.TRAGEDY 2007-08-10 ch 1, | abuseAwhh. They seemed cutee. Too bad. (: I loved it. |
| lemon lollipops 2007-08-06 ch 1, | abuseWow. When you had said it was the librarian, I was like, "Whoa." and it suddenly felt kinda intrusive. The story was adorable and it seems fitting that it ended like that. But I'm not going to lie: I'm a sucker for happy endings. :P -lemon lollipops |
| Naomi Schemer 2007-08-01 ch 1, | abuseI have to admit that my favorite part about this story is that my favorite librarian ever was the librarian in my old Middle School named Mrs. White. Thus, I naturally pictured the narrartor as her and the library as my middle school library as opposed to my high school library. Just in general, I love odd POVs like this one. The ending was sad and a little unsatisfying but that's high school and that's relationships after all. |
| i-see-faeries 2007-07-06 ch 1, | abuseWow, this was interesting. Very amusing to read from a third character's POV. So different. The ending kind of leaves you unsatisfied. It was so abrupt, and it just seems like there's suppose to be something else. And I don't like how it just ended like that, but I get the point. And it does fit the story, no matter how sad or unsatisfying it is. So great job. I love it. |
| ks darkstorm 2007-06-26 ch 1, | abuseOmg this was really awesome, I decided I'm going to read all your stuff sayings how I liked Indecent Proposal so much. Yeah this was so cute and yet still sad. Loved it. |
| Ishtani 2007-06-25 ch 1, | abuseAw!! That's so cute!! In a sad kind of way...*sigh* Either way I like it, very interesting! |
| SerialXLain 2007-06-25 ch 1, | abuseOh my god (with three d's) I love you. I love this. :O The POV was nice and unique and I loved loved loved the dialogue and the end and yay! I love it. xD xxoxoxo! |
| iwishillwilluponyou 2007-06-24 ch 1, | abuseaww ;_; they shouldn't break up. that's so depressing. *sigh* it's a cute story though :D |
| Back of Beyond 2007-06-22 ch 1, | abuseAww no, why'd they have to break up? :( Lol, good little story, especially because it was written from such an individual point of view! XD |