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| Setsuna529 2008-07-28 ch 1,  | abuseI like the arrogance in the line "We go as we please.", it sets the tone for the poem and enhances the futility in the final lines. |
| say this sooner 2007-06-21 ch 1, | abuseaw, this is said. i loved it, beautiful work! |