Reviews for Chasing My Shadow

TheUndescribableArtist 2007-06-24 ch 1,	Wow You Made Me Scared With This Story It Was Riviting I Was Hanging On Your Every Word I Loved it. You Should Write More. You Wrote It Very Well.
C.Sabbadin 2007-06-22 ch 1,	“Well I see your still as messy as ever Sam,” I said. Was the "your" intentional? Because it is actually "you're" in that situation. Also;My brownish green eyes seemed strange to me. That would be hazel. But he was too afraid of hat she would say. Was the "Hat" thing intentional too? I know you said most were on purpose but it just doesn't sit well with a grammar freak. I like the idea. It was interesting and you made the switch from first person to third smoothly.
Purity of Light 2007-06-21 ch 1,	Wow. That had to be one of the most compelling and interesting stories I've ever read. A couple of mistakes, but no biggies. I really liked it :D