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| Qzie 2007-12-03 ch 4,   | *I would be laughing, but I'm in the library* That was amazing. I like how you applied it into real life. And yeah, you spelled Darth Vader correctly. :) Great chapter! -Qzie |
| TranceGemini109 2007-11-29 ch 4, | OmG! That was funny. I don;yt like high school musical either. I watched the first one...was scared,watched the second ione... as terrifyed! |
| SeventeenForever 2007-11-25 ch 4, | HEY! This is Citrus Tea, I changed my pen name...but I AM ALWAYS ONLINE! What do you mean I'm never online?!?!? You never gave me a PM or an email about it! T_T ...anyways, that was a good chapter hope you update soon...just a suggestion maybe you could have the guy calling and the girl thinks it a telemarketer and choas occurs =] |
| Boochers 2007-11-23 ch 4, | hehe darth vader sexy hotline. too funny. |
| Sahara Hayden 2007-11-23 ch 4, | Haha. That was really funny :) Update soon!! |
| cheesy-romance-lover 2007-11-23 ch 4, | haha i like this chapter! and the story, its really funny! hehe. i like the telemarketing idea, they r really annoying!! and i also think Anakin is hot b4 he turns evil xDD |
| Smoo231 2007-11-23 ch 4, | haha, nope, still funny! by the way, its alright if you put in a little character development (like you did at the beginning) It helps to understand where the character is coming from, you know? Just sayin, cuz it sounds like you were beating yourself up about putting in details of your life. |
| Fer1190 2007-11-23 ch 4, | So hi!! haha, first time I leave you a review here... your story is so funny! although i wouldn't dare do that to the telemarketers... but anyway, just a little mistake i found in this last chapter in the phrase :"Yeah, I'll let you into my house when Pig grow wings and fly off the Tashma Hall" Did you mean the Taj Mahal? anyway, great chapter! keep up!! |
| griffensgrace 2007-11-22 ch 4, | I think it would have been funnier without all the little braketty things. Also, you almost had the darkvader voice dead on, it's more like coku coku (trying saying it into your fist, it sounds really weird). It's too bad about your beta reader, I'd volunteer, but school is murder. |
| Pinkamoo 2007-11-22 ch 4, | Ello dear, lovely chapter! You have absolutely shocking spelling though :p Hope you get that beta! Update soon. |
| estrela jem 2007-11-22 ch 4, | yay! and update! lmao! so funny! update again soon please!! |
| FallenAngelForever 2007-09-28 ch 3, | LMAO!! This is one of the funniest things I've read in a while. |
| jjcard 2007-09-19 ch 2, | sorry didn't really read the ending part for the lates chapter until now. I'll be a beta reader. I'm in the school newspaper so I might be good at it. |
| jjcard 2007-09-19 ch 3, | still freakin good man, sorry I haven't thought of anything yet. Being a chinese man and/or resterant is a classic and the last one was some how really funny even thought it wasn't really that good of a prank, I guess it was the inticipation and the randomness and funnyness of it. props. ...maybe they phone you and you make them think you are in Irag or something... ...you tell them you are a telemarketer (and maybe even work there)... |
| estrela jem 2007-09-09 ch 3, | LMAO! OMG THIS IS SO FUNNY!! I can't believe nyou actualy do this to the poor people! lol I really like this story and I can't wait for the plot to reveal itself! Keep on updating!! The best was the "I like Sharp things" lol. (My brother and dad looked at me funny cause I was laughing so hard hehe). |