There was definitely a lot of rhyming in this but the overall message was clear and well thought out. I wish I could hear the rhythm that goes along with it!

(Don't kill me about Of Words and Wishes btw. My computer crashed because it sucks and my parent's one is stupid and won't let me log on so I can't upload anything)

haha this is a very angry song. i liked it, though, even though i'm more of a happy person. :)

Wow...I can almost imagine a rap with these lyrics. And its really cool. I like it plain and simple. I especially enjoy this line in the chorus "So go take a hint". It makes me think of people ostracizing a person while he/she remains ignorant of it. Good choice of words. Keep writing. God bless.

AWSOMENESS!
lol
is this the one i read at the park??
seems familiar...
lol
love it
ure good at the ryhming...
lol
i really have to go (basement)
lol
byez!!
i promise the next review will be exta longg...
:D

i LOVED this. everything about this all fit together. not a line seemed out of place. great job!