Good poem.

~Twilight Starr~

Too true. Why does everything have to be so complicated?

Nice poem. Everyone likes to feel that they are denied something it makes life life.

~SirScott

such a cool poem! its a type ive been considering tampering with before, but i never really got around to it. i like the "what i should have" line! lol

luv krystelvampire

i like this a lot. love how it ends. nice work!