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| Nostalgic Memoirist 2007-10-02 ch 5,   | Aw...update! Cry cry cry |
| X-Romantic-X 2007-09-02 ch 6, | Love this story, each chapter is short but sweet. PMS. This is going to my favourites. Sophie x |
| Frenchyesca 2007-08-29 ch 6, | BUM BUM BUUMM! |
| Artemis Anderson 2007-08-27 ch 6, | Ooh...interesting twist. |
| Artemis Anderson 2007-08-27 ch 5, | Aw.. |
| Artemis Anderson 2007-08-27 ch 2, | Aw...this seems like such a sweet story...d:) |
| letsuseswords 2007-08-27 ch 2, | Hmm..Very good idea! (:)) You might want to describe more, and get more into their heads, so the reader will connect better. Good job over all! |
| Frenchyesca 2007-08-24 ch 5, | Good chapter, update soon. |
| Frenchyesca 2007-08-22 ch 4, | =) They're reunited, yay! Continue! |
| SuperCUTEJensen 2007-06-21 ch 4, | very cool... i want more more...hope you update soon |
| nicolexnoxious 2007-06-21 ch 4, | Longer chapters and sentences would improve your story. I like the idea though. =] Good luck with it. |
| Nicola Heartache 2007-06-21 ch 3, | A short read. I wish for more! I want a more thorough look into Chase's head and... Arabella's, was it? You don't mention their names overmuch -- or really at all after the first chapter. Not exactly necessary, but if this was a story you want published someday you may put more depth into it. Still, if one were to just be browsing through stories, looking for something short but sweet, almost like a poem but with just that much more substance to it-- I'm glad I found this. Thanks! |
| Nicola Heartache 2007-06-21 ch 1, | This first chapter is sweet, short and believable. I'm so eager to read more -- I'll just get right on that. |