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| randompoetry 2007-07-15 ch 1,   | I pictured a tune in my head, and it was very appealing sounding. I just think the chorus with the but and but each one line down didnt flow. BUT thats just me, and you know how its sounds with the real music and I dont, so maybe it fits there. Nicely done though! |
| Ashelin 2007-06-21 ch 1, | Great song! I loved the lyrics, and could really relate to the chorus. I really liked the whole thing. Awesome job! |