|Reviews for ignorance|
| Butterfly -x- Effects 6/25/07 . chapter 2
I really love this one, yet again. Keep it up [:
| Ashelin 6/21/07 . chapter 1
Some of the beginning was hard because of the grammar, but I really liked the ending.
"an you told me like you didn't know like it was the hardest thing and i hated you for your indecision"-put a comma after "know".
"I just looked at you and looked at you and you told me you didn’t know and killed hear you say it."- the second "you" should be "me" I think. I also think there should be an "it" before "killed" and a "me to" after.
Everything else was really nice. Keep up the great work!