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| Kiss.Today.Goodbye 2008-02-08 ch 1,  | abuseeffective use of repetition, i enjoyed the imagery, and the fact that i had to re-read it to completely correlate it in my mind. It was emotive, and made good use of literary technique. :) |
| Ashelin 2007-06-21 ch 1, | abuseI really loved the imagery, and the symbolism you used. It was quite enjoyable. The last three lines were perfect. Great job! Keep it up. |