Beautiful. beautiful images and wonderful descriptions. So lovely, I think everyone who reads this will see something different in it, and get another meaning from it.

hey! it turns out i read your work before i knew it was yours...which helps eliminate bias. ;) anyway, i wanted to tell you that (this one very much included) you have pretty stories. Reminds me of a pretty glass music box that plays slightly haunting music...They make me smile and intrigue me. I really enjoy your writing.

I am not a good editor, so i can only tell you how i feel about this story. but constructively speaking, you seem to qualify your statements a lot. 'You will also hear, just as frequently, that she rarely, if ever, spoke to anyone. This is also true, however, only to a certain extent. ' like this sentence. i think it takes away from it a bit. also, for me, there was a bit of repetition of ideas (like how no one knew who she was) that just didn't feel right to me. but i loved your idea and your descriptions and the feelings i got from it. sorry this is such a long review...