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bitterlyysweetchoco
2007-07-19 . chapter 1
The last lines really make this poem great.
It's pretty
meaningful
lovely
Con adoración,
Tesa
Cracked Mirror Image
2007-06-22 . chapter 1
yet again ur writing amazes me...i love it...great useof simple and semi-simple words to make such an impression on someone...great job
gRaCe
Ashelin
2007-06-21 . chapter 1
I've thought like this before. I think that this is a very relatable poem, at least for me. I adored the last two lines. Something about endings always get to me. Great job!
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