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| rosieroo 2008-08-02 ch 8,  | abusegreat story! cant wait 4 the next update |
| Hannah C. Thaw 2008-07-09 ch 8, | abuseGeez. She is so rude. I would think she would be nicer to the man who is letting her live at his house, bought her breakfast and drove her to work. Interesting story. I like how it fits into your Guardian world. Ah Shateal. I can never decide whether I like him or not. He amuses me, but also infuriates me because he can't give a straight answer. Keep writing! |
| Katherine-the-greate 2008-06-29 ch 8, | abuseoh. what an ending...not. that ending was not your best for a chapter. I am interested in why someone went in her apartment. I can't wait to see the fight between the two boys. i was also hoping for a bit of a verbal cat fight at least in this chapter. overall it was okay- for you it seemed a little flat. you usually have something big blow up that makes me go 'wow'. the Shatel part was a nice sneak in from Fire and the Furball-which i also hope dearly, that you update soon. so, please update again soon! |
| atreyu love 2008-06-25 ch 8, | abusejealousyy? haha. PLEASE UPDATE! |
| atreyu love 2008-06-25 ch 5, | abusei did NOT expect him to just do that. go from teasing.. to killer |
| atreyu love 2008-06-25 ch 3, | abuseadorable :) with the groceries & wine and all :) |
| confessions 2008-06-17 ch 8, anon. | abuselol. Nicholas just needs to admit he likes Justice. update soon. |
| Lady of Confusion 2008-06-17 ch 8, | abuseUPDATE SOON! |
| dreamercrys 2008-06-17 ch 8, | abuseI love it! Just wondering if you knew that when you write Quiet you write quite instead...not critizing just didn't know if you knew or not. Can't wait to read more. |
| Ali 2008-06-12 ch 7, anon. | abuseLove this story. please update soon! |
| Just me 2008-05-02 ch 7, anon. | abuseOMG update dude |
| ellie 2008-04-29 ch 7, anon. | abusethank you for another brill chappy xx |
| k-ky 2008-04-29 ch 7, | abuseNice story. Keep up the good work. ^^ |
| divinci89 2008-04-27 ch 7, | abusewrite more please |
| autumnnsprite 2008-04-27 ch 7, anon. | abusewow! awesome chapter! oh how embarassing it would be to walk in on nicholas and another woman... and how sad, haha... i wonder who ransacked her apartment, would they have been looking for her necklace? im so excited to find out what happens next |