Aww. Man I got a feeling Nicholas is going to pull a douchebag move...

Another grade chapter, keep up the great work!

Ok...I'm not going to lie. I've become somewhat addicted to your story. Haha. I really want Nicolas to be a good guy, but now I'm not so sure. UGH! Look what you're putting me through!

*falls out of chair*
Yay! An update! I love you!
and I like the closing sentence, even if this chapter is kind of short...ha.

^_^
No errors that I can see,
Good luck!
ImmortalIncarnate

aww so sweet, what did the brothers talk about?

That was such an intense chapter! The fight was great! Uh...You've probably already found one, and I'm not a beta, but if you want someone to help review your work, I'm free. :)
If not, it's ok. ;) I can't wait to read more, sadly I'm out of time today. Sigh. Keep up the good work!
P.S. I'm glad that the roses were from Nicholas.

I hope they're from Nicholas. I like him better than Sebastian. :)

Man I wish I were rich enough to dump that much money. Haha
Some errors...
I showed of stuck with seemed nice.

Taking one of my bags from him for handing it to him.

Those kinda boggled me. And it did seem like you rushed through the chapter. A good read through would help. :) Good work.

I love this story.

I'm intrigued. But be careful. I saw a few spelling errors. Read through the chapter again and you should find them. ;) Excited to read more.

I like the plot and the characters, but I'm a little confused. Estelle is said to be deaf, but at first it is said that she speaks back to people. Later on, it says that she signs her words. Other than that, the only other thing I'd just suggest is working on sentence-structuring, because commas in the right place can make a big difference. I do like that you make the main character believable (such as going to work and taking the setting into account). I've only read chapter one so far, but when I have more time I will be sure to read the other chapters.

I am really really really enjoying your stories. I love your characters and the way they are developing. I am very curious about when we'll get to know more about her "flashbacks" or whatever they are. I am looking forward to getting to know more about Nicholas and his family, as he still seems a bit mysterious up till now. You have a new fan. Keep up the good work!

I bet he smelled his dad on the back of her neck. Because nobody really washes well there, do they?

~Mo~

can't wait for the update...how is it that nick doesn't realize that she is a seer? don't guardian's usually have two powers?

Dragons are too perseptive. HAHA!

~Faeries