Good use of repetition and build-up. The confusion is felt in how it slowly fades from completely negative to positive, and the last lines conflicting with themselves so much that the confusion is even greater.

I also liked that you used the word betwixt. ^.^

-Jesse
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this is really good! depressing but good!
lol thanx 4 the review!

Great use of some powerful words in there, I liked this alot.