DOESNT SUCK, K?` D:
youre so wicked. dont hate on yourself. :(
and this is frickin aweesomee k?
makes me think of axel C:

YAY IM DONE OMG
just means you need to post more. lolz.

You don't think much of this one? YOU DON'T THINK MUCH OF THIS ONE?! AH! Stop, calm down Holly. ::calms down:: Phew, I'm sorry, I went a little crazy there. This piece, it was...more than amazing!! The way you had that story unfold and how the pyromaniac set fire to himself and said no one would miss him. And the ending was so chilling. Gosh I love it so much! How can you think lesser of this? It was so completely wonderfully written! DEFINITELY a fav of mine!

hmm...a dying person amongst the wreckage of a fire.
i really like that pattern you have going on with the "flicker and fold" and the two lines afterwards, it really adds a sense of passing time and semi-awareness.