Fantastic poem.

Twilight Starr

Good work! Though it took a bit of a cliche turn at the end, the brevity of the piece made it highly effective, and you executed it well. I hope to read more of your work!

-Cristina

o i like it. lots of rythm and its just freaing awesome like that. . thnxs so much for the reviews. your awesome.

*evanescence123*

ONE!

this is morbidly beautiful. I can see the pain, and the longing for freedom! Good job

-ShookieDoesntKnow

Wow very visual image and the layout is intresting as well- good work.