Very nice, and about friggin' time.

I'm glad to see that spite is a strong motivation for the two sisters, especially in regards to one another. It was also interesting the way you summed up the changes from Beowulf's time to the (relative) present.

Very interesting! I enjoyed reading this, and I really liked your style. It's very easy to picture the actions of the characters. Good job!

Hmm... I really enjoyed reading this, and looking at your little exert at the bottom, I will eventually look into the other story as well.