Wow, Very interesting...still naught else to say though.

Intriguing, should be interesting.

You suck.

Keep up the good work love i'm excited she is getting away from master as well i cant wait to see what happens.MUAH

this is really exciting stuff keep it up your awesome i'm very proud of you too. i love you -Derek

wow best chapter so far i love you so much.keep going.please

Ok, so I know this chapter is pretty confusing, but its also important. I've got to edit it, but basically it's a young man going to visit an older man in his home. If you want to know the exact identity of the young man, which is a total spoiler, go back to the chapter "The Oracle" and read it closely.
Again, this is pretty important, so make sure to read close!

I am sorry to say that, all though it was good, this chapter was not up to your usual standards, I hope that you will go over it and bring it up to par. Still enjoy your story though.

Continue! Continue! Continue! PLEASE continue!

Your story's still going strong, can't wait for the next chapter.

Hm, little short, im a bit disapointed, but theirs always the next 17 chapters...

its just the way i thought the story would go the direction its going is very promising keep up the good work and please dnt stop writing this story.

that was so fun to read :)

good chapter its been awhile fool :) you need too write lots lots ok

This story is really progressing, keep it up.