Reviews for The Next Time You Buy Tampons

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Satan'z Myth 2008-07-03 ch 1,	abuseThe story was somehow..weird, but fairly realistic and thoroughly enjoyable. I like the ending and the characters...the descriptions given have brought the scenes to life. And, haha..the part that he had to buy tampons for his sister and he was totally LOST was hilarious!!
Karasu-sama 2008-06-22 ch 1,	abuseAw, this was damn cute. (FP's probably gonna star that out. Ugh. Oh, well. You get the idea, right?) Haha, if I had a brother, I would SO make him buy my feminine products. Just to torture him. xD But if I had a brother as sweet as Jarred, I'd have to at least think about the unnecessary torture before I made him do it. ;D I wish there was more to this~ I'd love to see if Jarred and Lyle (which is a GREAT name, by the way!) were meant to be. :'3 And, yay, tuxedos! 8D x
E 2008-06-21 ch 1, anon.	abuseI=E~the anonymous provider of your requested constructive criticism: Great story! very interesting. kinda a stretch for a oneshot, tho. it's pretty long. divide it into chapters to make it better and more suspenseful. hope you read my other reviews, too, and took into mind my "constructive criticism." i am a fan of your writing and hope for you to post more stories soon! e-mail me if you feel like it. ciao!
deuteriuM Xtreme 2008-04-27 ch 1,	abuseI like this. (: The tampon premise is hilarious, and at the same time all the mixture of emotions is realistic - kind of melancholy, somewhat hopeful but never over the top. I also thought initially that the ending was going to be sad, but you left it open-ended without an obvious happy ending. And it's nice that way. ^^
Kaerith 2008-04-21 ch 1,	abuseThis utterly reeks of real life, and it's fabulous! No stretch of imagination required or suspension of belief to accept some stupid plot premise; this could actually happen. The first encounter was great; not a silly "love at first sight" moment, just some vague interest with little acknowledgment of it. And their discovery of each other didn't immediately lead to sex and lifelong pair-bonding--just some hot making out which is quite justifiable because they are both horny teenage guys. I also love the optimistic ending.
blackberrydream 2008-04-06 ch 1,	abuseAw, too cute! A romance that starts over tampons, gotta love it!
gossipgalmishi 2008-04-05 ch 1,	abuseoh nice! Jane is either a biatch or a bimbo on puberty
Imagined Insanity 2008-03-02 ch 1,	abusegah loved it. makes me want to send my brother out for tampons... hmm.
nomy 2008-01-06 ch 1,	abusei enjoyed it!! its so cute and funny the way they met..and i thought atleast the Brandon guy like really in love with Lyle but its all bullshit isnt it..there goes another point to hate bi guys..but not all are such a jerk as Brandon mind you.. its was entertaining and really kinda stupid Lyle decision to reject the offer from Jarred..fortunately Jarred is like totally like or love (maybe?) Lyle..the ending kinda cute with the story starts with the buying of tampon and it ends with the buying of tampons also..so cute and kinda suitable in the story...great job!!^_~
Pearlita 2007-09-05 ch 1,	abuseCute! I really liked it!
Amindaya 2007-07-18 ch 1,	abuseHaha, OMG I loved it. That was just beautiful. It has the feel of a soap opera because of all of the coincidences, but it was still so believable. I just loved it. :D
firestar267 2007-07-03 ch 1,	abusehehe loved it :) just very well done
Lady Psychic 2007-07-03 ch 1,	abuseWow! This is a great story! I loved the tampon thing. It was hilarious!
magalina 2007-07-02 ch 1,	abuseAw! That was really sweet! Jarred was adorable. I gotta read more of your stuff :D
Lai Anderson 2007-07-02 ch 1,	abusewow. this is good. serendipity it is. hehe, nice job!

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