Aw, what a great ending. I love the love/hate relationships, it just seems so much more fulfilling when they finally get together, you know? Awesome one shot!

Haha I thought this was funny. Really liked it!

haha

This one is awesome too!! :)

aw. that was cute.

i think you could have made it longer, just to add a bit more of a history to them. it just seems all too .. sudden.

anyway, those are just my opinions. i liked your story anyhow :)

I am in love with the sense of humor here. It's very unique.

lol, this was hilarious! I loved it! :D

This was really cute! I especially liked when she started cursing him, that gave me quite the laugh:)Really good job!

HAHAHAHA! ROFL, my cheeks are sore from laughing!

This is GREAT and HILARIOUS, especially the mop-in-spaghetti bit.

Though, what happened to the other jocks? Surely they would be wolf-whistling in the background? O.O

~ShadowedFlower

P.S.- "“Are you trying to brake into the janitor’s closet?” a deep voice said behind me." Brake=break

Haha, this is hilarious! I love it!
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haha. that was so funny. smart girl to use kissing against her admirer/boyfriend/lover etc. etc.

"you're not getting another kiss from me for a long, long time." I love that girl. Really. And I'm a straight girl. Well. Anyway, LOVE the story! Really creative. Janitor for a day... wow, even I wouldn't have thought of that. No really, I wouldn't have. I'm not creative at all.

not bad
- not bad at all for a first timer
very interesting plot line
though i think it progresses a little too quickly from hate to love and the love doesnt have much clarity
but overal excellent wonderful superb

LOL love this!

I love it. You make me want more of it, which I think you should at least put another chapter in, but of course, you dont have to just cause I asked.
JM