wonderful... i love this...

:D :D :D
thanks for the story!! :D :D :D
it was really sweet :) :) :)

i kno Jamie Wenslow!
:D :D :D
well. not like.. really kno... but i kno the story he's in! and i am a HUGE fan of RockFan's works.. and i saw ur name on her stories and about how we should check out ur stories.. and i did! and i dont regret it at all!! :D :D :D
im a fan of ur works too now!! :D :D :D lol

Damn. I just love this story i read it over and over. Girl, you've got tallent. i don't know what you're doin on this website. Go get yourself a publisher and kick **!

Great story, keep up the good work.

Amazing.

Truly.

You're inspiring.

I like how you ended the story with a similar line from the beginning, that's really cute. :) I really like your story even though some times I would lose interest in your long paragraphs (but that's just me and my ADD xP). The only thing that bugged me a bit was how your writing seemed a bit distant. When I usually read a story, I feel like I know the characters but yours seemed a bit distant. Besides that, I really liked your story. :)

I have to say that Rockfan didn't lead me wrong. You had a few grammar problems and in the beginning, you didn't have much of a hook or anything that made me go "WHOA!" but it was still pretty good. And when Rylan and Jayson was talking about diggers or something, I was a bit confused since I'm not all too familiar with the terms so it might have been a good idea to say a bit more about that. I like the characters and how you seemed to tell a lot about them. I can't wait to see what happens :)

Such a great story! I know nothing about motocross, but your characters drew me in and I felt like I was racing myself.
This story was different, interesting, with enough twists to keep it interesting but not too many that it became tiring.
Basically, thanks for writing, it was a pleasure to read, and I look forward to reading more of your work!

god ** story

I am so glas I listened to RockFan when she said to check your stories out in her authers notes. I loved this story you are a talented writer and I can't wait to read more of your stories. Keep up the great writing.
Tanya

You are fabulous. And so are your characters and this story. I hope you write one about Jack and Alex and Dustin respectively.

Loved it!

RockFan told us about your stories and I am glad that went and found them.

Awesome! I LOVE this story and I love how you ended it! Can't wait for the sequel.

(Update Mistletoe!)(Please!)

LOVED IT! YEAH!

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