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Basara
2007-06-24
ch 1,
abusebitter sweet...

nice...
The UGLY American
2007-06-22
ch 1,
abuseNo, no, no, you have
to have your summary be
a haiku as well.

Either that or
it should be
a lune, you know, right?

lol, poetry. In other news--that would be a really cool scene in a movie. A girl's house is burning, and she screams every time a flaming piece of roof tiles falls on her, and as she screams, there's an image of her and a boy playing at the beach.

Speaking of that, there's a really fantastic author called Haruki Murakami with a really fantastic story called the 100 percent perfect girl. Check it out. It's fantastic.
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