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| Beyond-the-Shadows 2008-05-16 ch 1, | abuseYes it does bear resemblance to some of your other works :D I like it, tis nice. |
| gulistanlik 2008-05-01 ch 1, | abuseOmg I never knew there was a prequel to one of my favourite one-shots! Wow,the prequel really does spice up the bookstore. Excellent job, once again! gulitsanlik |
| Microsuede Mouse 2007-12-28 ch 1, | abuseOh. Oh. OH. As soon as it said 'Julie' I was curius, and now I'm sure. It gives us some nice context for the other one! |
| simplicity is complex 2007-12-25 ch 1, | abuseAH. i finally got down to reading this. AND AND AND AND AND. its the prequel to bookstore right. heh. but anyway this is lovely it is THE LOVE! haha |
| whacked 2007-10-22 ch 1, | abuseHey...remember me? *insert sheepish grin* First of all: I know I know! I have been away for so long! I'm so very sorry. Out of the blue I actually managed to get a life (by which i mean uni and interning) and was swamped and now to top everything of I have started final year and I am beyond swamped. Uni is no joke yo (of course me being me I only realise this exceptionally late in the day). But ugh! I haven't been able to sit down and read anything on fp let alone review something for some time! Tis a sad state of affairs I tell you. Anywayy enough of my yapping. On to what I do best! (well not really) The review! Ok so I really like this, even though I harldy like anything written in second pov (I just don't like the whole "you" part of it). But yes...connection to Bookstore I suppose? hehe. clever you. It was as always, adorable. You know what I would love to see you write...just as an experiment something completely different from the sweet stories (although you write them extremely well my dear and I love them whole heartedly).And i'm not talking just angst here. What would you do with horror (although I hate to say that cause it seems to be the "it" genre on fp these days) or I don't know..something not angsty but real you know? ok maybe you don't. Anyway you should think about it (when you have time..you seem to be as swamped as I am). Ok and now...Whispers...what happened? I got a message over message of it being up but it has disappeared now! I had actually managed to sit down and get through half of the first chapter before the real world pulled me and I had to reluctantly let go. I was starting to get into. Although I have to say the angle of it being written as an essay is not one of my favourites. Don't know why, I know there are some good stories on fp that are written like that but I just can never seem to get into them. Anyway...whats the news on that? so as you can see I still do the whole 20 page review thing. sigh. apologies! I shall be more helpful in the future. |
| freakyAngel 2007-10-07 ch 1, | abuseYou jerk! Freak! Psycho! Nutter! Genius! It's Bookstore, ain't it?!?! Huh? Huh? Huh? |
| vivacioussky 2007-10-03 ch 1, | abuseThis is a beautiful prologue to Bookstore. I loved Bookstore, it is one of my favourite one-shots at FP. This one too is definately going in my favs. On another note, Eulogies was really well written too. Looking forward to Whispers :) |
| akeyana 2007-09-15 ch 1, | abusePrequel to Bookstores, right? It's sweet. I liked that he found out BEFORE they actually got together; it's a break from tradition. Other one was cuter, but I heart Bookstores to death, so that's probably why. I still loved this, though. x.akeyana |
| Rory Gilroy 2007-08-05 ch 1, | abuseREALLY SWEET. =D AND I KNOW WHAT FIC ITS SUPPOSE TO BE CONNECTED TOO. =D |
| The Cheerio 2007-07-06 ch 1, | abuseNice. Real nice. :] I had to look back to your profile to see what you were talking about, then something like this happened: *GASP* OH! OH! Its the boy's point of view in Bookstores!! haha! (insert funky lil dance) Love it!! |
| StarryMelody 2007-06-26 ch 1, | abuseI know, I know! It's the two kids from Bookstore, right? |
| DuchessYappingDog 2007-06-26 ch 1, | abuseIs the next story going to be in the girl's point of view? M.. It doesn't remind me of anything, but I haven't read your stories in a while, so I am going to go back to look. :D |
| trix-a-belle 2007-06-25 ch 1, | abuseI actually haven't looked on your profile yet but i'm assuming this links to the story (for the life of me i can't remember the title) where the man is watching the interaction between the young couple. He phones her when he is stood a little way off and explains he likes her and such. I liked that story and I CAN'T REMEMBER THE BLOODY TITLE! I liked this one because it was told from the lads point of view which isn't very common. Keep coming up with the great stories! xNx p.s i didn't review straight away because i've been really sick and haven't been able to get out of bed so sorry!! |
| xoxluurve 2007-06-25 ch 1, | abuseawwh, i liked this a lot. and the follow up to this, of course (: both are very captivating. keep writing, yeah? ♥ xoxluurve |
| canDii-aPpLe 2007-06-23 ch 1, | abuseOMIGOSH! its da prequel to bookstore rite? that was so sweet ^^ |