Reviews for A Walk on All Hallows' Eve

The Dutchman 2007-07-14 ch 1, anon.	abusePure Genius. Awesome. Good Work.
C.Sabbadin 2007-06-22 ch 1,	abuseYou missed some of the rhyming sequences but I can see where you wanted words to be pronounces differenly (own and down.) I would also recommend doublespacing between stanzas. This idea was different (like most of yours are) and I liked the message about sinners and saints.
Sacha Lynn 2007-06-22 ch 1,	abuseokay. I love that. Especially "Like laughter for the crying man / And tear drops for the grinner." Although you typoed "mins" instead of "mind" and methinks if this had separate stanzas you should go through and put an extra line between to differentiate between them. Those two things aside, I love this. :] It's creepy in like a friendly way, like a contemplative Casper. o.O
deannanic63 2007-06-22 ch 1,	abuseI loved this poem, despite the fact that graveyards scare me beyond all reason. ~deanna
DarkGorgos 2007-06-22 ch 1,	abuseO, I just loved that ending, did not really see that one coming.