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| Twilight Starr 2007-10-16 ch 1, | abuseWonderful poem. For ever is actually meant to be a combined word (forever). A typo with "fir" instead of "for" was also there. Great job though. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| GoneWithTheWind 2007-07-11 ch 1, | abuseAbsolutely LOVED it! your writing is amazing :) |
| Chihero 2007-06-23 ch 1, | abuseSometimes you can tell when a peom was written just for the sake of writing it, and other times you can tell that it was written from someone's true feelings or emotions. I believe this was the latter. After reading so many poems that seem to be written so that they simply rhyme instead of make sense, it's nice to read one where it feels more... I don't know, raw. Like it was written from real expierience. And even if this wasn't... well, you could've fooled me. Good job. :) |