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Reviews For: This Time It's Over

kloun doll
2007-12-23
ch 1,
abusewhen I was reading I just thought it would be a great song! I don't know I liked the rhyme from this.

happy holidays.
Twilight Starr
2007-10-16
ch 1,
abuseGreat poem.

I like that she got enough guts to leave him. ^^

~Twilight Starr~
Arafax
2007-07-14
ch 1,
abuseHmm...a bit cliche perhaps...but that's pretty much how a person feels sometimes. Nice work.

~Arafax~
vaudeville summers
2007-06-22
ch 1,
abuseI liked it a lot; good job.
~deanna
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