this is short, but powerful and interesting and amazing all at the same time.
thank you. :)

keep writing,
mia

Hee, you have more reviews than words :D

I like it. You're very succint. Nice :)

interesting, i liked it. i liked how you put so much into so nothing.

Oh my gosh. This poem is the shortest I have ever read, but one of the most powerful. Suspenseful, thought-provoking. Truly well done. Like an epheremal love or a night too-soon-ended. This poem is truly powerful, and truthful. Amazing feat.

Forever,
Stephen

Nice, I can relate. Maybe this sounds weird, but I really like the look of this poem.

'Nough said. I agree with that wholeheartedly.

Okay, a bit short, but fair enough. It'd be cooler if you added a few more couplets.

Oh, my. Indeed!

*laughs* so true...
~deanna

a lot said in these few words. nice work!