Reviews for Bleeding Hearts - FictionPress.com

Nihon Girl 2008-01-30 ch 1,	abuseso she died of a car crash? (yes my brain is a little confused) This story isn't real, right? coz the last part, the ones in Italics, sounded as if it true; that Elisa in this story is Elisa Bronte in the real world..but I don't know.. Anywasys,,Sebastian died to fast..he died anyway and it was...(I can't say good, I don't like dying people) okay.. (weird review...)
Elfish Suicide 2007-06-24 ch 1,	abuseDeep. Very touching, but a bit rushed. I think you should keep it as a one-shot and continue a revamped story with the same ideals if you want. Treat this as a first draft, or an outline, if you will.