Interesting. I really like what you're saying here. It's funny to think that it's all an expression of how impossible it is to truly express music in the form of words. But I'd say you came pretty close. Good job.

This is amazing. I love the stream-of-consciousness style it's written in. I'd quote my favorite part, but that would be pretty much the entire poem. I've never been to a poetry slam, but this sounds like the kind of piece you'd recite with your eyes closed and your hands gesturing in the air. Um, I'll stop rambling now. Suffice to say this is added to my favorites list. < 3