That was really cool. I loved the descriptions. Yeah, the whole "it was just a dream" thing usually annoys me to no end, but yours didn't. It was great!

OMG That was so... FREAKY! In a cool kinda way. I

I liked this. It was creepy, and morbidly fascinating, which I like. I usually don't like it when people are all like, "It's all because of you!" but this didn't seem so bad. I'm glad that it was only a dream. It was a suitable ending, escpecially when his boyfriend called.

This is probably one of your best pieces of prose writing. It was very disturbing (and I mean that in a good way, it really affects the reader) and gripping. I really liked the ending. Usually "it was all a dream" things annoy me, but you did it in such a way that you showed a lot of charictarization so it doesn't feel empty at the end. Very haunting.