Don't try to equate Hamasaki Ayumi with any other celebrity. I live in Puerto Rico and even *I* know *exactly* who she is! So yeah. Just don't. ^_^

Very interesting! I will definitely read the rest of it.

I must begin with my deepest apologies on my late reviewing. I've been meaning to catch up on all of the stuff you've written and posted, but life has a strange way of ruining your plans. I feel terrible considering you asked me politely to read your stuff and let you know what I thought along with helping me on my own writing. All I can say, is that I'm sorry and that I hope I will be able to make it up to you.

On to the review!

I've been waiting forever for an update on this story. It's sad that it no longer updates as often considering this is my favorite story you have up on here (not sure why. Might be the characters).

As you write a hell of a lot better than I, I truly cannot find much wrong with it. The character developement is just a wonder. I also love how you describe your settings in a way that's easy enough for me to know what's going on, but doesn't overload like Tolkien (don't get me wrong, he's probably one of the best writers in history, but I love story more than setting).

All I can say is great job as usual, and you better update this story sometime soon or the Muffin Gods of Doom shall wreak havoc upon your doorstep. lolz!

omj im so glad your writing more!
im sorry i havnt reviewed this earlier but i havnt been on the computer in forever and ya...
it was a good continuation, i had to go back and reread sum parts to understand it but it carried on nicely
it would have been nice for it to be a little bit longer with more interaction and plot but as a transition back into continuing the story it was nice:)
keep writing!
-sarahh

This story always managed to make me laugh, even if I'm in a particularly bad mood :) Great chapter! Can't wait for the next bit!

~Carm~

Very interesting. I'm getting into the story already. :)

It's amazing how you came up with all of those names; they're all so unique.

I'm definently going to be reading more of this one.

-Alisa-

Ps: Thanks for the reviews. They're greatly appreciated!

Hey hey! Haven't been on Fiction Press in ages and thanks to your email deciding to return to this. Have to say it was as good as I remember it. Lovely sense of humour and well-written to boot. Keep up the good work Koki! And Sgt. Frog reference? AWESOME.

This was really entertaining to read. :] I look forward to chapter nine.

I actually whispered "oh, shit" when that girl turned to them. I thought she was gonna attack them or something. Lol. It's good. Maybe Ota could get stuck manning a booth and when Keisuke sneaks off to talk to some girls Nono shows up and talks to Ota... But, that's just an idea. What time of the year are we up to, so far, anyways? I don't think we've passed Christmas, yet... Hm...

Nono is so cool! :D!! And I should try to learn that technique...

Cute, huh? Lol. That's sweet.

Wow, I'm glad you updated! I really like this story. Good job! And update soon, okay? :D

I still love Nono's eyes. They're awesome. As for how this story is going... It's pretty cool. I can see why you're havng issues continuing it, though. I'd be having trouble figuring out the details, too. Lol.

""Do ya like koalas?"

"No, not really." Hardly even knew anything about them except that they ate eucalyptus. And, they spent all their time eating and sleeping. Wait. Maybe we had more in common than I thought."

That is definately my favorite part, so far. Lol. I like her eyes, btw. I like anything that's different. I'm just weird that way. -.-'

Ota and the teacher becoming friends? Keisuke isn't gonna like this! :P But, I try to become friends with my teachers, too. Or, at least, to the point that they like me. For some reason, I keep getting seated in the back for the room... xP I guess that's the punishment for paying attention.