you are brilliant/inspiring/ect.

Wow, really powerful, especially the end. Good job :)

quite good. there was an obvious mood to the piece and that's what attracted me.

The last lines of this are perfect. I especially liked the first four lines, too.

wow, powerful poem. Sad. I liked it.

Faith

Nice. I really love the last four lines. The second one seems like it could use better wording, but it still works.

ohjesus. perfect ending lines. just perfect. this is fantastic, it really, really is. I love the almost playful way it starts, the way it draws you in, like a secret being whispered into your hair that your straining to hear.

great job...its kinda morbid...sorta...but its great over all

gRaCe

Beautiful.. i liked it, i keeps you guessing about what's happening to the character...

keep up the good work!