Reviews for Sniper Cinderella

Reviews For: Sniper Cinderella

Brackynn 2007-10-16 ch 1,	abuseFirstly, thank you so much for reviewing my story! :) Secondly -- what a great twist on dear old Cindy's story. (And realism is seriously overrated, in my humble opinion ;) ) I loved Cinderella's snarkiness, really enhanced the morbid humour -- in short, thoroughly enjoyable, with the last line being rather perversely satisfying ;) I did notice at some times the tense changes -- I think you meant for it all to be in past tense, but it does lapse into present -- "They're here tonight, and I'm glad it's a masked ball..." -- and future -- "This will be my masterpiece." I just got a little confused as to whether Cinderella is supposed to be thinking these parts, or whether they are just part of the narration; in the case of the former, perhaps putting thoughts in italics would help clarify? But aside from that extremely trivial nitpick -- loved this story. So creative, so unexpected, so wonderful :)
nightflora 2007-09-18 ch 1,	abuseHighly amusing. Although instead of killing him on the wedding night she should keep him alive and torture him for years. That would be even more satisfying.
innominate noun 2007-08-28 ch 1,	abuseAh, the chasm where realism used to be is what makes the story beautiful. I really adore this. Thank you for writing!
Gimstan 2007-08-12 ch 1,	abuseVery funny, i really liked it! :)
storykeeper 2007-07-18 ch 1,	abuseThat's awesome! Go Cinderella! Airily, you have a great sense of (morbid) humor.
BlueEmerald4 2007-07-12 ch 1,	abuseWow, this was pretty interesting, never thought that Cinderella would be the type to try and kill Prince Charming. Lol. But this was a good tale that you could definitely spin out into a longer story if you want. I hope you take a look at some of my stuff, it's not really much good (the completed one) but hey, I like knowing what others think about it. -Liz/BlueEmerald4
Teffie 2007-07-09 ch 1,	abuseHa! This was hilarious. Short and sweet. :D At one point you forgot a space between "know" and "this", but that was the only mistake I found. Very nice.
Sophelia 2007-07-03 ch 1,	abusebeautiful and very unique. too bad it ends like this - i would have loved to see how she'd kill him. =]
Nara Merald 2007-07-02 ch 1,	abuseNot very realistic no, but since when was Cindy ever particularly realistic? I liked this. It was new and decidedly entertaining!
Behind Hidden Doors 2007-06-24 ch 1,	abusevery very nice. nice character personalities (uniquely hilarious), nice one-liners ("Royal blood stains much better on white."), very good overall. "It all started with.." is a bit misleading, though. Makes one expect that the real story starts after the Sniper Incident (it seems that you don't intend to add to the story, and it all ends with the wedding night). still, very very nice. i've been looking for something as nicely written as this for a while.
Ms. Anna 2007-06-23 ch 1,	abuseI love it! It is simply awesome. Going on my fav. list!
dancinglight 2007-06-23 ch 1,	abuseVery nice twist on the over-used Cinderella plot. You could have given the climax a bit more time but, other than that very good.
shoot the messenger 2007-06-23 ch 1,	abuseLOL, this is a great story. I loved the tone of the narrator. Very nice^^

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